Purpose: Deadline wednesday 27th March
Strenghts:
- Good use of shallow and deep focus.
- Good use of camera movement.
- Plot has a conventional genre and a good preferred reading.
- Camera angles are professional and establish the location very well.
- Camera distance is perfect, close ups begin as character exposition develops
- Realistic make up and effects.
- Good use of props in the frame.
- Location of the production reinforces the genre
- Location improves the verisimilitude of the clip
- Costumes dont give away the fact the actors are meant to be adult, as they wear casual clothing.
- The sequence has serious potential with a right soundtrack.
- Short at the moment, but promising.
- Include Non diegetic sound such as dialogue to enhance understanding.
- Footage a bit grainy due to the low key lighting.
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